lullaby of the crucified comic

as you may or may not know i have a comic on the side called lullaby of the crucified which is a tribetwelve slash comic basted off a music video by Alesana 

the comic is a noah x observer type comic and pretty much gos the same way the video does.
so far i only have a few pages done but the run down of the comic is;

noah waking up in the woods and finds a note on him telling him to run,right as he sees the keeper (slenderman) 
while running away he sees observer and chases him threw the woods,leading him to a clue on the side of the highway next to a hotel.
within the club is the keeper,but he stays his distance from noah while observer is seen sitting at a table.
he tricks noah into getting drunk and biting into an apple,observer bites into the other side and as he does he turns into kevin.
kevin gives noah another note,asking if they can leave and get away from the keeper.the two go to the hotel near by and in a drunken trance noah ends up making out with him.
when the lights are turned out flashes of firebrand and keeper are seen.
within the flashes kevin is also seen turning back into observer and injecting noah with drugs.noah starts to convulse while observer messes with him.
flashes of fire and firebrand are seen again and then the keeper is seen in the corner of the room holding an apple,the words "god can't help you and angels won't save you,prepare the walk hand in hand with the damned" are on the walls written in blood.
firebrand starts to scream in agony as noah is seen with his eyes rolled back and nose bleeding,observer laughing while he sits on top of him in bed.
noah convulses more and fire seems to be coming out of his body.
suddenly noah smiles,while still foaming at the mouth.
firebrand pulls observer off of noah while he continues to convulse and foam at the mouth.
firebrand is then seen holding observer against himself.
another flash and observer is seen giving a gentle kiss to noahs cheek before placing a note on his chest that reads,"i will see you again in a place where the sun is silent"
noah is then seen still laying in the bed.smiling but with dead eyes.
in the last page firebrand is seen holding observer in habit land,(aka a place where the sun is silent.)